First Draft VS Final Music Video

We created two versions of our music video, one based on our previous feedback. 

This is our first draft; 

After uploading our first draft onto youtube, we asked more people for audience feedback. This was to help us understand what we did well and what we needed to change. 

Our main question was about the titles. Although we originally liked our titles, we started to change our mind. The majority of the people we asked said that our titles looked good, but they were not a convention of a music video. It was suggested that they looked more like the titles from a short film, which was not our intentions. 

Titles - version 1 

Titles - version 2 

After the feedback we decided that we would move our titles to the corner of the screen and in a smaller font size to make them more conventional.

Titles - Version 3

As well as this, during our feedback we were also told that our end credits were too similar to the end of a film and that they were not conventional to a music video. Instead of changing these, we decided that it would be better to remove them. 

Version 1 

Version 2